Michalea
- Body dysmorphia research more on it – look at cases/ real life stories
- Add more quotes from journals
- Get a psychologist/doctor’s point of view to your theme of social media and body dysmorphia
Lea
- Elaborate on one’s identity
- Stick to mental illness caused by medias etc
- Talk about the youth today what they go through pros and cons of the internet
- Why does the youth want to be celebrities? (have a question in the end for the reader to think about)
My feedback (Raquel)
- Stick to giving different children’s perspectives on the topic (opinion based – them thinking logically and having proof for the essay)
- How mirror scales and the difference between children’s mirrors and adult mirrors can show how one is confident and have a high self-esteem – subconsciously a good point that we don’t even realise
- How children grow up with narcissistic parents? – a journal/news to look at, how a child can develop narcissistic aspects which leads into to their youth/adulthood
- Find evidence to back up the child development and understanding one’s self
The Mirror - Raquel Soares Freitas 